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Post by Sir Francis Drake's Heir on Aug 4, 2007 20:21:53 GMT -5
Title: The Bird and the Fish Summary: Filly and Mona go for a walk. Rating: PG A/N:I don't claim that this is any good, but this board was lonely. So I wrote poem. Yes, I know it sucks. And dernit, I couldn't even keep it purely Charming Roots. ~~~`~~@/***\@~~'~~ Robes of earth and eyes of sky Glisten, shining, on the walk And earthy hands and careful hands Are intertwining as they stroll Inside, eyes of fire watch Happy and amused and a little bit envious And sighing, and kneads her wrinkled forehead For a bird may love a fish… He calls her name and comes to look And laughs a little like a jolly old father hen Happy to see his chicks flown the coop And he kisses her neck ~~~`~~@/***\@~~'~~ Although, this is how I think the other teachers see Filly and Mona. I think they're the "Aw aren't they cute" koochabooboo yay-yay snugglebunny pairing amongst the staff. Even if they seem a little bit ill-suited. And Min, the eternal pessimist, is convinced that they are doomed. Even though DD's like, "AWW! I WANT TO BE THE FLOWERGIRL!" And Min's like "You're an idiot." Like it? Love it? Hate it? Want me dead now? Please let me know! (And yes I know there all no male hens. I was trying to make a point. )
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Post by OSUSprinks on Aug 5, 2007 0:06:38 GMT -5
Ir's hilarious and very sweet. lol Thanks for posting the very first poem!
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Post by laundrybasket on Aug 8, 2007 10:05:20 GMT -5
*squee* Such an adorable little poem
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Post by Sir Francis Drake's Heir on Aug 8, 2007 20:14:23 GMT -5
Yah... cept not.
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Post by stefdarlin on Jan 1, 2008 12:33:57 GMT -5
I really like this. Immediately I thought of a conversation from Ever After:
Danielle: A bird may love a fish, signore, but where will they live? Leonardo da Vinci: Then I shall have to make you wings.
I simply love that movie. I love the role play of Albus and Minerva. That play of pessimist and eternal optimist. But he does kiss her neck at the end....makes you wonder, are they together yet or aren't they?
The walk Pomona and Filius share is sooo sweet, as you say, I do see how they represent all that is calm and sweet in a relationship.
Cheers,
Stef =o)
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