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Post by Smaug on Sept 11, 2008 12:13:45 GMT -5
The Bouquet Word count: 100 Rating: E Genre: Angst Dedication: For Saki, a real drabble of exactly 100 words as you are so fond of them.It was the most beautiful white bouquet. Soft creams and stark whites blended together into a blur as it flew through the air. Filius could still see it now: fingers grasping for flowers; Pomona peeking over her shoulder at the crowd of women; the soft chuckle from everyone in the room as it landed in the lap of a disgruntled looking Minerva. The bouquet in his hands now was identical; he laid it down on the ground gently and tears formed in his eyes. Oh how he missed her. A beloved wife, friend and mother who we lost too soon.Finite
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Post by OSUSprinks on Sept 11, 2008 12:18:00 GMT -5
ELO! HOW COULD YOU KILL HER??? It was all so beautiful! And they had kids or at least a kid! I am in tears. THis is just...
What has happened to our fluffiness?
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Post by SakiJune on Sept 11, 2008 17:13:55 GMT -5
"Laura, could you please lend me your fluff bat? Thank you." Amy!! A dedication! I am so glad... but I am also at the point of crying. You have been able to say everything: their life together, since their wedding, until she... (I cannot say that word, forgive me) I'll pretend this was just a nightmare he had. I just cannot think about him losing her, but this image is so vivid and precious... I'll hold it dear. *hug*
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Post by OSUSprinks on Sept 12, 2008 22:13:38 GMT -5
Saki is right, this was a beautiful image. It did give you a sense of their entire lives together and just what he had lost. Beautiful job, dear.
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Post by stefdarlin on Sept 14, 2008 9:00:17 GMT -5
This is awesome and so terribly sad at the same time. I bow to you for saying it in only 100 words. *sniff* It's so sad that a bouquet that signified probably the happiest day of his life would now signify the saddest, when he laid her to rest.
The is an odd turn of events, for Saki to be looking for the fluff bat. Lol.
Cheers,
Stef=o)
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Post by MMADfan on Oct 7, 2008 11:50:29 GMT -5
Oh, I'm gonna cry and it's all your fault!
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