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Mar 11, 2008 14:46:30 GMT -5
Post by morethanacrush on Mar 11, 2008 14:46:30 GMT -5
A/N: I didn't re-read this at all, I just did it all in one go. I knew that if I went back and read it, I would delete it, and I don't like to do that. So here's hoping it 1) makes sense and 2) it somewhat decent. lol ttyl.
He was a Ravenclaw for heaven’s sake. He was supposed to be reasonable, and there was nothing about this emotion that was reasonable. This sort of thing was expected of any – and every – man alive. Filius seemed to have exempted himself from this universal; perhaps he was thinking too highly of himself, to be above such nonsense. He had, after all, grown up with sisters, and after seeing their relationships with their father, he knew he would have to be different.
Chocolate swirls in the form of twin doe eyes, looked up innocently at him. His heart stopped, and he could feel all reason slip away from his mind. Her tiny smile with tiny teeth dazzled him. Curls matching her eyes bounced on her shoulders as she tipped her head back to look up at Filius.
“Daddy?”
Filius’ mouth slid open slightly, as he smiled as his daughter, picking her up and placing her on his lap. He didn’t want her to leave this place, in his arms.
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Mar 11, 2008 19:31:48 GMT -5
Post by OSUSprinks on Mar 11, 2008 19:31:48 GMT -5
This was so adorable! Of course she is a daddy's girl! I love your descriptions! It was good to see a story from you dear!
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Mar 11, 2008 22:43:55 GMT -5
Post by stefdarlin on Mar 11, 2008 22:43:55 GMT -5
I agree with Sprinkles. You do such lovely work with descriptions. This was so cute. I do believe she has him wrapped around her little finger.
It has been too long since I have gotten to read something from you, thank you for posting. ;D
Cheers!
Stef =o)
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Mar 12, 2008 3:47:01 GMT -5
Post by SakiJune on Mar 12, 2008 3:47:01 GMT -5
I'm about to cry. I cannot explain how I feel. It's so powerful and sweet. Hats off to you! *why do I always quote Del?*
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Mar 12, 2008 16:31:59 GMT -5
Post by prayingnut on Mar 12, 2008 16:31:59 GMT -5
soooo cute!
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