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Post by furandfeathers on Jan 14, 2008 19:16:01 GMT -5
hmmm so yeah. This is my first flash fic and my first Fil/Mona fic.... whoa. Title: A Comfortable Mess Rating: K Genre: Fluff Summary: pillows. 'nuff said. A/N: Nothing belongs to me. It’s all this woman named J.K. Rowling. A Comfortable Mess Pomona stood with her hands on her hips and surveyed the room. Pillows were strewn about the room, and blankets were strung up between pieces of furniture. The child had been returned to her parents, but Filius remained stretched out in the middle of the fort. “As comfortable as you look you have to clean this up, you know.” Pomona said. “But it’s cozy. Join me?” her husband said winking and patting the pillow beside him. “I’d love to, but we’re having dinner with my parents, remember? And every time we baby sit for Albus and Minerva you seem to make a bigger mess.” She told him, stooping to pick up a pillow. When he didn’t move, she launched it at him, hitting him squarely in the chest. “Hey!” he exclaimed in surprise. His wife just giggled. “I suppose you think that’s funny,” he said, sitting up and reaching for a pillow. Her eyes widened in surprise as he sprang up and ran at her. She shrieked and ducked behind the sofa, scrambling to get her own weapon. They were soon running circles around the room throwing pillows in every direction. At last, they collapsed giggling on the sofa. “You know, there’s still a mess.” Pomona stated. “True,” Filius replied. “It’s an even bigger mess. However, you helped make this one, so you get to help clean up too!” Pomona just gaped at him, as he kissed her lightly and pulled her off the sofa.
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Post by stefdarlin on Jan 14, 2008 20:17:47 GMT -5
LOL! This is sooo adorable. I love the fort. Ahhhhh, the pleasures of childhood. ;D
I am the lucky one, my five year old loves to build forts and occasionally we put her little tent up in the house too.
Congrats on your first flashy fic too!
Cheers!
Stef =o)
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Post by Smaug on Jan 15, 2008 3:35:53 GMT -5
This is so completely wonderful I love it, it's so cute and sweet and it just really works for them.
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Post by SakiJune on Jan 15, 2008 3:37:08 GMT -5
I used to make forts in my room too, when I was a child! Just that way, with blankets and pillows and chairs... sure, it reminds me of so much time ago... Some time I would like to turn back time... Is it really your first FFPS fic? Wow, it's wonderful! Congratulations!
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Post by OSUSprinks on Jan 17, 2008 22:41:13 GMT -5
This is so completely wonderful! I absolutely LOOOVED it! I could just see him there and the expression on their faces while they were fighting with the pillows! I have a huge smile on my face now dear!
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